The first post is "My Blog Start!".I think it's shortist. maybe I forgot somethings, such as my biodata, my favorite pop songs or my customs. If I can plus those, I will be better.
The second "How Music Makes You Feel". it's better a lot. but maybe on the concluding sentence I can write more about classical music effective to person.
The third is"He is too young to conduct, isn't he?". well, the young conductor has talent.
the fourth until sixth I just finished it.
Overall, I think my own writing some simple sentence structure, because many complex sentences can not be skilled use.Certainly, I have a lot wrong grammar sentence, so I need to strength those place.